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... Now, discipline always seems painful rather than pleasant at the time,
but later it yields the peaceful fruit of righteousness to those who
have been trained by it. Hebrews 12:11
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Propmin User
Posts : 339 Join date : 2010-05-12
| Subject: Poetry Mon Aug 02, 2010 3:29 am | |
| This is just about the most favorite of mine that I have done. And, just as a side note, Ive posted these before here and there, but at this time when I feel like there are real bretheren reading here, I want to share. . Fears Creeping Spider Prickly Black Colored features On his back My body frozen Statuesque Protracted fangs In my flesh Growing up Children taunt Shy frailties My Father wrought Inadequete A constant thought Weakened spirit Still distraught Suspicious Man Dark attache On building roof Heart of day Simple device He detonates Nuclear terror Death awaits SMASH the spider LOVE tHyself PRAY to GOD. Wynston Smyth 2004
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| | | Propmin User
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| Subject: Re: Poetry Mon Aug 02, 2010 3:36 am | |
| Crescent Moon pt.2
The great agitations of the Sea Was long foretold and by decree The many moral violations and blasphemy In the sight of Heavenly Hosts and Gods great Divinity.
As ignorant masses on earth debated Claiming their uncivil rights so Violated The witless crowds were myopically fixated On absurd concerns Demon created
As empty suits were cashing in On lewd pursuits and liberal spin The so easily corrupted hearts of Men Were leading us all merrily to Oblivion
The seas apparent indifference Surpassed only by their ignorance Allowed their enemy circumstance And thru open gates gained entrance
On Western faces shock and surprise As mushroom clouds began to rise Above the cities and thru the skies--- The Piper is paid; and off he flies…
Wynston Smyth 2004 | |
| | | brendan User
Posts : 467 Join date : 2007-12-06 Age : 69 Location : Dublin, Ireland
| Subject: Re: Poetry Mon Aug 02, 2010 6:50 pm | |
| Hi Matt,
These poems read very well. My guess is the second one has to do with 9/11.
The first one reminds me of how vulnerable we are, yet how tough we appear on the outside, and how terribly dangerous we can be if we get the balance wrong.
If you like, I will give poetry its own section.
Thanks for those poems. I really appreciated them.
Brendan.
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| | | Propmin User
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| Subject: Re: Poetry Mon Aug 02, 2010 8:10 pm | |
| Thanks, Mr. B. Actually, the second one is about the 9/11 to come, the one that hasnt happened yet. But it will. And when it does, God in Heaven help us all. This is a feeling I have had since I was a young child. Maybe because I was born during the height of the 'Cold War' rhetoric, maybe because I was raised in a Mid-Western city with an air force base that was, at the time, a "Strategic Air Command" centre that housed B-52 Bombers and controlled dozens of Titan II ICBM silos in my area. At the time, my parents owned a small tavern, and the pilots of the various military squads/planes would come in and "chat" while they drank. I learned allot, and I learned it early. I also got allot, as in 'cool' airplane models they used for dog-fighting training, as well as a folder that is simply unbelievable in what it contains. One of the pilots gave me a training folder that has a brochure of each and every Weapon in the Soviet arsenal at the time (1980, or so). Its all very outdated now, so I dont mind talking about it. But each Soviet Air Force weapon was detailed out in terms of its capabilities; missiles, planes, bombers, anti-aircraft guns, the whole lot. All of this hardware that is detailed therein is by now mothballed and consigned to a reclamation lot at this point. But the impact this kind of thing had on me, and the reality of the world we actually live in definately remains intact. Men havnt made all these fancy fighting machines just so that they can look neat as a childs model, or in a picture. They've made them to kill, en-masse', their fellow human beings, in a manner that Cain couldnt have dreamed of in his wildest imaginings. SO there it is. Im a product of a world that fundamentaly operates on a day to day basis with the notion that we are all truly doomed, and its only a matter of time. Not "if", but "when". Another sad fact, is that I feel as if Im one of the truly few human beings walking around, day to day, that truly realizes this, and what the very existence of these things in our world really means. | |
| | | Propmin User
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| Subject: Re: Poetry Tue Aug 03, 2010 5:18 pm | |
| The Plague
Public square Sundays a cough and a hack throwing tomatoes at drunks on the rack
City Gates left open for Black Hooded Rats a coffin Makers Dream.
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Barnyard Angst
Grey suited sweat hogs repeating a rhyme to poor bleating sheep getting sheared all the time
An Angry young Chicken Turns into a Mime Will he try to crow?
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Parcel Postman
A Postal Inspector runs house to house retrieving the mail He had once handed out
In light rain, thick mud Snow all about He's feigning Sanity
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Hopeless
Once pink and perfect a Liver was fine Now scabbed and scarred because of the mind
If Heaven was watching It turned a blind eye Dont pick-up the phone
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Red Robes
And when the Oceans were drained below ground There was beneath them no Hell to be found
Men with agendas in Robes Had gone out To Commandeer the Train
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wynston smyth 11-3-05
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| | | Propmin User
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| Subject: Re: Poetry Tue Aug 03, 2010 5:24 pm | |
| Revelation 8:10, 11 (Young's Literal Translation)
Rev 8:10 “And the third messenger did sound, and there fell out of the heaven a great star, burning as a lamp, and it did fall upon the third of the rivers, and upon the fountains of waters,” Rev 8:11 “and the name of the star is called Wormwood, and the third of the waters doth become wormwood, and many of the men did die of the waters, because they were made bitter”
Wormwood
A night enveloped by blackened pitch turned deep and empty grim and boundless, from which the Moon itself had fled fearing desertion, immersion and blind, endless dread
The stars common, ordinary sight had withered and diminished to the extent that they might be neglected from view fearing desertion, immersion in the blackened hue
The mass Of the heavens grand creation Lay in dimensional creases Hoping to hide from accusation From sentence of the liar Fearing desertion, immersion And judgement of fire
An Angel Before times of evil men watched as carnal theatre unfolded in front of him But now his force abounds Beloved rightness, brightness The third trumpet sounds
Behold! flickering of deep afar From solitary black night Beginnings of a great star A lamp, and brighter still Arching stalling, falling Towards earth ill-willed
And look… Pure waters crystal and clean That give life to mortal men The star fell upon unseen Deep rivers silent burned Away from Flowing, glowing To a slime green they turned
The men Partaking of the streams Grew sickened from consumption repulsed and seeking the means Of relief from the stars glitter Were bemoaning, groaning Because waters were made bitter
And now Supplies of life giving drink Were divided into a third As spirit began to shrink The men did all they could But Alas!, the vanity, insanity As their waters became Wormwood _____________________ wynston smyth 2007 | |
| | | brendan User
Posts : 467 Join date : 2007-12-06 Age : 69 Location : Dublin, Ireland
| Subject: Re: Poetry Mon Aug 09, 2010 11:30 pm | |
| Hi Matt,
This is a fine take on the prophecy. I especially liked this part:
An Angel Before times of evil men watched as carnal theatre unfolded in front of him But now his force abounds Beloved rightness, brightness The third trumpet sounds
It has been a very long play. I hope we're in the last act now.
Regards, Brendan.
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| | | Propmin User
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| Subject: Re: Poetry Tue Aug 10, 2010 1:46 am | |
| Thanks Mr B. I really enjoy poetry, and I need to "get into" it again. But much like with music, my basic thought is, if something has been "done" before, I dont need to repeat it, copy it or mimick it. WHy not save time and just consider the origional? In other words, I have to have an idea on something that I think is unique or a unique way of expresssing it. I like to try to come up with new styles and rhyming scemes. I love reading Poe. He's simply the best. I almost have 'the Raven' memorized to the point of performance. Almost, but not quite there yet! This is so awesome: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cLSmhpwLdEQ | |
| | | Derek User
Posts : 364 Join date : 2010-05-02
| Subject: Re: Poetry Thu Aug 12, 2010 12:33 am | |
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| | | Propmin User
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| Subject: Re: Poetry Thu Aug 12, 2010 10:14 pm | |
| - Derek wrote:
- What a tremendous voice for reading poetry Burton had, here he is reading some of Dylan Thomas', "Under Milk Wood".
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uuPO2Kvqlms&feature=related
Wow, that was awesome. I had heard of Dylan Thomas before, and knew he was a great poet. Richard Burtons reading was very powerful. I looked DT up, and to be honest, I get a bit lost in the subtleties of the ethnicities of the British Isles, so the "Welsh" poet part is lost on me. BUT, I will have to procure a copy of his works for my library, for sure. I'll set him besine Robert Frost, Dante, and Poe. Try these from Poe: The Conqueror Worm https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3qnj17goUP0&feature=related Ulalume https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VesUJqm5rss&feature=related Allot of 'wierd' "goth" people are into Poe, and I'm definately NOT of that ilk. Those puoor souls that go down that path have no hope. One of the things Poe personaly experienced to an extreme degree was the sorrow and pain of the loss of loved ones, and it happened in such a way to him that produced his particular outpouring of words, timbre, and rhyme. The guy was an absolute genius, and was trapped by several converging forces beyond his control. Its a minor miracle that he was able to produce what he did given the details of his life. | |
| | | Derek User
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| Subject: Re: Poetry Thu Aug 12, 2010 10:52 pm | |
| Hi Matt, Most of the Celts on the main part of the UK, that were not in Scotland or Ireland, finished up being driven west into Cornwall or Wales by successive conquests of Britain, up to, and including the time of the Normans. If you Google, "Offa's Dyke" you will get the general historical idea! Wales is a beautiful, mountainous, small country west of the Midlands of England. It is famed for the poetic nature of its language and the singing ability of its people. But they are much given to strong liquor ...or so I am told! Some think poor, Dylan Thomas, drank himself to an early death. A very sad poem of Dylan Thomas, but one that makes me think of the brave fight of my father, who died of cancer when I was six and he was forty-three, is this one from, Under Milk Wood: DO NOT GO GENTLE INTO THAT GOOD NIGHT Do not go gentle into that good night, Old age should burn and rage at close of day; Rage, rage against the dying of the light. Though wise men at their end know dark is right, Because their words had forked no lightning they Do not go gentle into that good night. Good men, the last wave by, crying how bright Their frail deeds might have danced in a green bay, Rage, rage against the dying of the light. Wild men who caught and sang the sun in flight, And learn, too late, they grieved it on its way, Do not go gentle into that good night. Grave men, near death, who see with blinding sight Blind eyes could blaze like meteors and be gay, Rage, rage against the dying of the light. And you, my father, there on the sad height, Curse, bless me now with your fierce tears, I pray. Do not go gentle into that good night. Rage, rage against the dying of the light. I seem to recall how this poem moved, Brendan, as it does I. Warm regards Derek | |
| | | Propmin User
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| Subject: Re: Poetry Fri Aug 13, 2010 1:23 am | |
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| | | brendan User
Posts : 467 Join date : 2007-12-06 Age : 69 Location : Dublin, Ireland
| Subject: Re: Poetry Fri Aug 13, 2010 12:19 pm | |
| Hi guys,
These are great leads and I’m fortunate enough to have the time to follow them up. I’ve listened to The Raven and read the text to get a better grasp on the storyline. I listened to a different version on YouTube with less background noise, even though I have always liked Christopher Walken. I wonder why we were more or less confined to Mark Twain’s Adventures of Tom Sawyer in school.
I really did take a fancy to Do Not Go Gently. I have it on a page about my father on my own website. I actually thought I was going to listen to a short poem when I played the YouTube video of Under Milk Wood. Now I’m up to Part 8 and there is a good bit more to go. Burton’s voice is wonderful, and is a sombre base to which all the other voice tones contrast. I’m reading the text and I’m appalled by how much I have lost touch with the dictionary of the countryside. I think we miss out so much by having no understanding of the difference between a dell and a glen, a linnet and a swallow, a beech and an oak.
But I guess this isn’t the point of the drama. It seems to be a severe criticism of so-called civilised life in a small village. But it has as many people problems as Angela Lansbury’s Cabot Cove or John Nettle’s Midsummer Murders. I find it very depressing because it harks back to the time I was born into – I think it was published the year I was born. And man, do I remember the soul-destroying façade of respectable life in those days and the enforced silence that ensured it continued. It makes me wonder why we don’t appreciate the times we live in now, where the silence has been broken on so many issues, up to and including child abuse. Who could have dreamed that these things would be spoken of in the street and even on national TV?
Without a doubt, the hypocrisy of the time broke my spirit as a young man. It seemed that the cover up permeated the world I grew up in. I can only imagine what it did to Dylan Thomas. I suppose his early death and the reason for it might say it all.
Regards, Brendan. | |
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